He got up and sat on the edge of the bedstead with his back to the window. “It’s better not to sleep at all,” he decided. There was a cold damp draught from the window, however; without getting up he drew the blanket over him and wrapped himself in it. He was not thinking of anything and did not want to think. But one image rose after another, incoherent scraps of thought without beginning or end passed through his mind. He sank into drowsiness. Perhaps the cold, or the dampness, or the dark, or the wind that howled under the window and tossed the trees roused a sort of persistent craving for the fantastic. He kept dwelling on images of flowers, he fancied a charming flower garden, a bright, warm, almost hot day, a holiday—Trinity day. A fine, sumptuous country cottage in the English taste overgrown with fragrant flowers, with flower beds going round the house; the porch, wreathed in climbers, was surrounded with beds of roses. A light, cool staircase, carpeted with rich rugs, was decorated with rare plants in china pots. He noticed particularly in the windows nosegays of tender, white, heavily fragrant narcissus bending over their bright, green, thick long stalks. He was reluctant to move away from them, but he went up the stairs and came into a large, high drawing-room and again everywhere—at the windows, the doors on to the balcony, and on the balcony itself—were flowers. The floors were strewn with freshly-cut fragrant hay, the windows were open, a fresh, cool, light air came into the room. The birds were chirruping under the window, and in the middle of the room, on a table covered with a white satin shroud, stood a coffin. The coffin was covered with white silk and edged with a thick white frill; wreaths of flowers surrounded it on all sides. Among the flowers lay a girl in a white muslin dress, with her arms crossed and pressed on her bosom, as though carved out of marble. But her loose fair hair was wet; there was a wreath of roses on her head. The stern and already rigid profile of her face looked as though chiselled of marble too, and the smile on her pale lips was full of an immense unchildish misery and sorrowful appeal. Svidrigaïlov knew that girl; there was no holy image, no burning candle beside the coffin; no sound of prayers: the girl had drowned herself. She was only fourteen, but her heart was broken. And she had destroyed herself, crushed by an insult that had appalled and amazed that childish soul, had smirched that angel purity with unmerited disgrace and torn from her a last scream of despair, unheeded and brutally disregarded, on a dark night in the cold and wet while the wind howled

How to Develop Backstory (Without Boring Your Reader)

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I often find action movies boring because I have the same criticism every time: More backstory.

I want heroes and heroines and villainesses with complicated motives that are tied to experiences from their pasts.

Without backstory, characters become puppets, their actions serving only the advancement of the plot and not their own growth and development as complex characters.

Without backstory, characters are hollowed agents of someone else’s desire.

Give me characters who are haunted by their past abuse and abuses. Give me characters whose past trauma manifests as strengths and weaknesses. Backstory doesn’t just help me know more about a character’s life, it tells me what drives their decisions, and whether or not I should be sympathetic to them.

Finding the perfect balance of backstory and forward momentum takes skill and practice. This article will help you:

  • Understand backstory and how to recognize it
  • Discover examples of backstory to avoid and mimic
  • Perform research to develop your character’s backstory
  • Incorporate backstory in your work successfully

What Is Backstory?

Character Backstory and Memories

Backstory consists of the past emotions and experiences that inform your character’s current actions, behaviors, and desires. In acting, backstory often refers to the character’s life before the movie takes place and can help the actor understand everything from the character’s appearance and body language to their weaknesses and vulnerabilities.

In fiction, backstory can occur off the page in the form of research, or on the page using a variety of techniques. Writers often deliver backstory through flashback, but this isn’t the only way. You can also deliver backstory through:

  • Comparison
  • Description
  • Dialogue
  • Flashback
  • Scene
  • Summary

Many people have argued that backstory slows down a narrative. While this doesn’t have to be the case—in fact, in genres such as mystery, discovering the character’s backstory creates suspense and drives the plot forward—the term backstory can be limiting.

5 Common Backstory Mistakes

Character Past

On the flip side, backstory can be done poorly. As a reader, there’s nothing I loathe more than encountering a long stretch of poorly executed backstory. Well-done backstory needs to be moderate and complex, and many beginning writers will err on one side or the other.

As John Gardner explains: “[The writer] must introduce [background events] in the smallest possible number of scenes, each scene rhythmically proportionate to those surrounding, so that the pace is regular” (The Art of Fiction, p. 59).

Keep the reader interested by avoiding these common backstory mistakes:

  1. Backstory Too Early. Many writers make the mistake of launching into flashback before establishing the character in their present reality. E.g. “The alarm sounded, they woke up, and it all came flooding back.” Cue extended flashback. Hooking the reader with the present situation before moving backward can help to keep a reader interested. Of course, with care and intention, this common backstory mistake can be used successfully, such as with the Gabriel Garcia Marquez example below.
  2. Backstory Explaining All. I see this in action films all the time: Heroes and villains are reduced to one traumatic childhood experience that drives all of their heroism and evildoing. These characters come across as one-dimensional and unsympathetic. It takes many experiences to build a believable motivation for a character. If you have only a single event from their past that defines your main character, consider creating more backstory.
  3. Unbalanced Backstory Ratio. All of the techniques for delivering backstory below, particularly scene and dialogue, can come across as intrusive or heavy handed if the balance isn’t right. Long passages of backstory in relation to the present action can interrupt the flow of the story and cause a reader to skip passages, or worse, to stop reading altogether. Observant readers are sensitive to an unbalanced backstory ratio, aka “info dumps,” and can spot them from a mile away.
  4. Stereotypical or Cliché Backstory. Certain backstories appear over and over again in fiction. Countless superheroes were forged from the ashes of their parents’ untimely deaths. Giving characters tragic backstories as a shortcut to characterization will make the reader roll their eyes. Unusual or unique backstories make the characters special and intrigue the reader.
  5. Clunky Backstory Transitions. Most of the time, writers don’t signal the shift clearly (which confuses the reader). Readers can spot info dumps from a mile away because writers often struggle to transition seamlessly into backstory. Misplaced memories and flashbacks can disorient or bore the reader. Seamless transitions result when the writer clearly indicates that they are shifting into a flashback or delivering information from the character’s past.

6 Backstory Techniques

Memories Scrapbook

Now that you’ve seen a few ways not to handle backstory, we’ll take a look at the ways that backstory can be delivered successfully. Remember that balance and variety are the keys to developing a rich and captivating backstory.

1. Comparison

Self-aware characters will often compare their present surroundings to something that happened in the past. Anything can serve as a trigger for comparison: a meal, a piece of furniture, a palm tree, a building, or a church such as in the following example. In the opening pages of Octavia Butler’s Parable of the Sower, the narrator compares the church they’re about to visit to one her dad once owned:

“Dad once had a church just a few blocks outside our wall. He began it before there were so many walls. But after it had been slept in by the homeless, robbed, and vandalized several times, someone poured gasoline in and around it and burned it down.”

To use this technique, simply have the character experience something in the present that reminds them of the past: an object, a person, a place.

Here we learn several things about the character’s backstory in only two sentences, and yet no flashback was required:

  • Her father is a minister
  • Her childhood was marked by the building of walls
  • They lived in a run-down neighborhood

2. Description

The character’s physical appearance can create an opening for the author to provide information about their past. In “Smartening Up” by Aoko Matsuda, we learn more about the main character’s aunt through the author’s description of her appearance.

“Studying her face, I tried to remember what she’d looked like when she’d worked at the bar. It hadn’t been a particularly classy place, and she hadn’t worn a kimono, but she was always properly made up, always attentive to her clothes and her appearance.”

So we learn three things:

  • The aunt has aged, enough that it’s tough to remember what she looked like
  • She avoids traditional Japanese outfits (no kimono)
  • She’s a stickler for outward appearances, very neat and proper

3. Dialogue

An author can reveal backstory within dialogue, which helps to keep the plot moving forward. In this example from “The Salt Witch” by Martha Wells, the main character gradually discovers (spoiler alert!) she’s a ghost. Her memories flood back to her in a conversation with a fellow ghost.

“She breathed out, owning it. ‘Yeah, that’s me under the car. I died. When they called the evacuation, I stayed.'”

Here, the dialogue works as a kind of an epiphany: she’s remembering her own backstory.

But dialogue from other characters can also reveal your character’s backstory, as long as it doesn’t get too expositional (it must be for the sake of the other characters in the scene, rather than for the reader).

4. Flashback

A flashback removes the character from the present scene and places them in a new scene that takes place in the past. This technique is one of the most common, as well as the most criticized for poor execution. In “Interesting Facts” by Adam Johnson, the narrator’s slipping grasp on time is evident in the way her memories meander and overtake the present.

“Our son recognized a boy from his middle school. I recognized him, too, from the talent show assembly. The boy had performed an old-timey joke routine, complete with some soft-shoe. Those days were gone.”

When readers gripe about flashbacks, it’s often because the flashback is too long and overtakes the narrative. Here, the flashback is just a single sentence, remembering the old-timey soft-shoe routine.

More writers should embrace the single-sentence flashbacks rather than a half-chapter flashback.

5. Scene

Many writers struggle to deliver backstory succinctly within a scene. The temptation to launch into an extended flashback is strong. However, just a few sentences of backstory within a scene can hint at a character’s depth and keep the reader interested in learning more, such as in this example from Grace Paley’s “Wants”:

“The librarian said $32 even and you’ve owed it for eighteen years. I didn’t deny anything. Because I don’t understand how time passes. I have had those books. I have often thought of them. The library is only two blocks away.”

Here, Grace Paley puts her character in a scene where she has to confront a question of her past: why didn’t she ever return those books over the last 18 years?

So by revealing this backstory, a mystery is created: What type of person would do that?

6. Summary

Sometimes a memory is so powerful that it propels the story forward, even in summary. Garcia Marquez’s novel One Hundred Years of Solitude famously opens with backstory:

“Many years later, as he faced the firing squad, Colonel Aureliano Buendia was to remember that distant afternoon when his father took him to discover ice.”

The memory of discovering ice continues for the rest of the chapter, and in fact, the firing squad scene that Marquez mentions in the opening sentence doesn’t return for many more chapters.

Summary works well when you have an omniscient narrator who can concisely capture vast sections of the character’s life.

12 Ways to Develop Character Backstory

Life stages and backstory

5 Pre-Writing Exercises

Before jumping into your story’s narrative, it’s a good idea to get to know your character’s backstory through pre-writing. Novels, short stories, essays, screenplays, and just about any form of narrative writing will benefit when you have a better understanding of your character’s past experiences.

For the following exercise, pick one prompt and write for about 10 minutes using at least one of the following backstory techniques:

The following prompts are listed in order from least difficult to most difficult:

  1. Write Your Character’s Firsts: The first season of the show PEN15, which takes place during the characters’ pre-teen years, explores the girls’ firsts: first day of middle school, first cigarette, first kiss, first time bullied, first R-rated film, first school dance. These kinds of experiences can help explain and drive your character’s behaviors later on in the narrative.
  2. List Your Character’s Belongings: What’s inside your character’s closet, medicine cabinet, wallet, purse, backpack? What have they kept from their past and what have they let go? Knowing these details up front can help you pinpoint the important details when you need them to do work for you later in your story.
  3. Answer the 36 Questions that Lead to Love: Back in 2015, The New York Times put together “The 36 Questions That Lead to Love” based on a psychologist’s study of intimacy. Answer them on behalf of your character and keep careful notes—you’ll want to use them to create all sorts of elements of your character’s backstory later.
  4. Write a Prologue: From the Greek prologos, meaning “speaking before,” prologues often provide context for a character’s current circumstances. The prologue to Carmen Maria Machado’s memoir, In the Dream House, gives the reader insight into the written history of queer domestic abuse. This context helps illuminate Machado’s purpose in sharing her story. Writing a prologue can give the author direction whether or not it’s included in the published work.
  5. Create a Timeline: What were the most impactful events leading up to your character’s present situation? Did your character fall out with a coworker, family member, or school friend? Did they meet someone new? Map traumatic events, such as illness, and positive milestones, such as graduating college, on your timeline. Note major changes in the political, social, cultural, and economic climates as well.

7 Backstory-Building Exercises

Past Backstory

How do you know how your character will react to the circumstances you’ve created for them, especially if you have no prior experience yourself? Creativity can only get you so far, and reading biographies, though effective, is time-consuming. To avoid falling into the research trap when you should be writing, you can do the work of learning more about your character’s backstory through scene.

Each of the below situations will provide you with information about the character’s motivations and behaviors, so you can feel confident that the path forward has footing in the past.

Pick one prompt and write for 10 minutes from the perspective of your character using two backstory techniques that are different from the one you used previously. Incorporate as many elements from your pre-writing exercise as possible in your scene.

  1. Create a Dating Profile. What qualities does your character admire about themselves? How do they want other people to see them?
  2. Hear a Religious Sermon. Are their experiences with religion positive or negative? How do your character’s religious beliefs shape their behaviors?
  3. Receive a Tarot or Psychic Reading. Whether or not the character believes in divination, receiving a reading on their behalf can reveal underlying motivations and help guide their actions.
  4. Take a Personality Test. Tests such as the Enneagram, Typefinder, or Big Five Assessment can accurately predict behavior based on personality. They can also reveal negative qualities about your character. The Enneagram test offers a spectrum of healthy and unhealthy behaviors associated with each type.
  5. Win the Lottery. How do finances drive your character’s decision-making? How would they behave if they had a sudden windfall of cash? Often neglected in fiction, finances—and unconsciously inherited relationships to them—can reveal a great deal about a character’s values.
  6. Write a Letter to a Family Member. Which family member would your character choose? How is their tone different based on the audience? What do they reveal and what don’t they?
  7. Have a Nightmare. Nightmares are fertile territory for discovering your character’s greatest fears and regrets. How do those fears manifest in their dreams and how frequently? How do they respond when they awaken?

Counter-Examples

Breakup in character's past

Up until now, this article has been pro-backstory. But suppose you want to write a story without backstory. Where can you look for inspiration? Indeed, several hundreds of authors have attempted to reduce or eliminate backstory with varying levels of success. I’m partial to a unique, well-written backstory, but I also appreciate the playfulness of experimenting with techniques that reduce or eliminate backstory.

After all, Stephen King is famously anti-backstory:

“The most important things to remember about backstory are that (a) everyone has a history and (b) most of it isn’t very interesting.”

Some Classics
In his infamous stream-of-consciousness novel Ulysses, James Joyce chronicles a day in the life of his character, providing almost no backstory. Likewise, Ernest Hemingway’s short story “Hills Like White Elephants” has puzzled readers for decades with its omission of backstory.

For a novel take on backstory, see Invisible Cities by surrealist author Italo Calvino, which alternates between descriptions of fictional cities and conversations between two explorers.

Sci-Fi
The science fiction genre, in general, can provide opportunities for authors to play with time and point of view in ways that minimize backstory. Octavia Butler’s Imago, from the point of view of a newborn, accesses backstory through the narrator’s parents. Lucy Corin’s short story “Baby in a Body Cast” takes a similar approach.

Cormac McCarthy’s The Road and Benjamin Percy’s The Dead Lands both take place in post-apocalyptic worlds from the point of view of characters who don’t look back.

Fairy Tales
Fairy tales, too—with their flat characters and non-motivation—often present minimal backstory to the reader. In The Grimm Reader, translated by Maria Tartar, the Mother Trudy character in the titular story has no backstory.

She turns a child into a block of wood and burns her in the fire because she’s an “evil woman, who does wicked things,” and a “witch in all her finery.”

Film
Many, many films avoid developing characters’ backstories, especially when it comes to villains. Children’s films like Disney’s 101 Dalmatians and Jim Henson’s Labyrinth don’t explain, for example, Cruella de Ville’s obsession with furs or how Jareth the Goblin King came to power.

The films 2001: A Space Odyssey and Mad Max: Fury Road famously skirt backstory as well.

Choosing Your Backstory

If you’re wondering if backstory is for you, consider your favorite books and films. What do you know about the characters? What would be gained or lost if you knew more or less?

Remember, there’s no one way to tell a story. Sometimes backstory provides essential context, and sometimes it can be withheld from the reader to great effect. Use the techniques and exercises in this article to discover more about what drives your character, and then use the most important details as touchstones that build meaning as the narrative progresses.

As a reader and writer, I take enormous pleasure in coming across and crafting backstories. When I identify with a character I’m reading’s past experiences, it’s as if the author has revealed a piece of myself that hadn’t previously been articulated. Writing the perfect backstory can bring a similar satisfaction, bringing the character into alignment with their true purpose.

 

Guest Author:

Laura I. Miller is a Denver-based writer and editor. She received an MFA in creative writing from the University of Arizona. Her fiction and literary and art criticism appear widely.

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